Brotherhood of the Red Shadow

Made a White Scars Army list for the year end tourney. May revamp it when the Army supplement comes in.

HQ
Captain Selva Khan(100) - Storm Shield(15), Relic Blade(30), - 180
SM Bike(35)
Troops
Tactical Squad(90) - Add. 5(80), Powerfist(25), - 195
Tactical Squad(90) - Add 5(80), Power Weapon(15), Missile Launcher - 185
Tactical Squad(90) - Power weapon(15), - 105
Dedicated Transport - Rhino(35), Hunter Killer Missile(10) - 45

Elites
Terminator Assault(200) – Thunderhammer & Stormshield(free) - 450
Dedicated Transport – Land Raider (250)
Fast Attack
SM Bike Squad(90) - Power weapon(15,) 2 Flamers(10), - 155
Attack Bike with Heavy Bolter(40)
Assault Squad(100) - Add. 5(90), Power Weapon(15) - 205

Heavy Support
Vindicator (115) - 115
Vindicator (115) - 115

Aegis Defense Lines (50), Quad Gun(50) - 100

Total - 1850

Bro..
I think the Assault squad is too lacking in punch with just a power weapon. Better if you swap with the PFist on that Tact squad.

The 1st Tact squad should take the free missile launcher.

I was thinking of multiple small units 5 man squad to divert the shooting attention of the opponent.
Since it is lacking points, do you advice on scrapping the 5 man squad and have two 10men squads and buff it up?

You could drop the 5 Man Tactical with Rhino as well as the Assault Squad and buff your Biker Squad to full size or at least 5 man so you can turn them into troops and have some meatshields for your Captain and if you want more targets the 10 man could be split into combat squads so more MSU.

So it would look like

10 Tactical - Flamer, Missile
10 Tactical - Flamer (cause its free) , Missile
5 Bikers - 2 Meltaguns, Attack Bike with Multi Melta, Sergeant with Power Fist (Fist because you don't get +1A for having a Power Weapon or just a Chainsword if you want him to be cheap)

You have about 300 points to play with after that. Just some suggestions.

I rather go two full squads than 4 5men squads.. you are just adding points in some games for the opponent

You could divide opponent's fire with MSU... but they gotta have something to threaten opponents with, cuz I would ignore a 5 man squad with bolters anytime.

Agree with LordAK on the assault squad... needs a powerfist to be more of a threat. Also, maybe a meltagun or two? I dunno, my preference.

Ditto on Shaun's suggestion.
You'll probably want a Drop Pod too for one of your Tac Squads (yes, I do notice the vindicators but you might want some tactical flexibility).

double vindicators are good! remember to deploy them both on your left and right flank. coz if you deploy them on center, if you wanna shoot something on the left, you will be exposing your right AV11 to enemies. and that usually result a dead vindicator coz that's how much threat a vindicator poses.

Thanks guys for the input.
I will try to revamp the list, maybe add a Command squad on bikes instead of the SM bikes.